Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted March 27, 2006 Chapters:  ...8 9 -10- 11... 


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A chapter in the book Oh Life!

Wonder!

by Alcreator Litt Dear


It is a wonder if you try, hope, expect to live dilemma free or dissatisfaction free, because living is an ocean of dilemmas, difficulties, problems, criticisms; you can't satisfy everyone always


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The Book of Poetry on True Experiences of Life in Living contains poems in different structures. It discovers the experiences, experimental and observatory feelings of life in diverse courses in dimen
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I advance, you warn
if I speed through, you caution
if I'm slow, you heat
if I'm soft, silk, mild, you taunt
if I'm hard, harsh, bold, you roast



 



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I have tried to compose this free verse poem in 5-7-5-7-7 syllables; no, this is not a contest entry


This is an independent Chapter 10 / 22 of the Book


Lesser punctuation and use of small letter beginning of each line are intentional


Feel the fate, truth, wonder


Whatever, whenever, wherever you do, there is always someone, somehow or other to point at


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