Spiritual Poetry posted March 26, 2006 Chapters:  ...11 12 -13- 14... 


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God has prized him! Why further recognition?

A chapter in the book Oh Life!

Prized!

by Alcreator Litt Dear


God has prized him. Question is, should he speak it or not? Please read and enjoy this challenge poem on God feeling, and God Prize. Please read this like reading a complete sentence


Background
The Book of Poetry on True Experience of Life in Living contains poems in different structures. It discovers experiences, experimental and observatory feelings of life in diverse courses in dimension.
Background (Edited)*
The Book of Poetry: Poems composed in different formats; poems on experiences of experimental living in dimensions 



A xeno-cloud in the xen-shadow,
whene'er overcast and
shades xen-shaded to blacken and
booms as chicanery to adumbrate
defiling my golden whitish embroidered azure,
the web of the ceaseless glow I do keep,


then at my very singular call,


Thou truly direct and
I behold seven of the million colors
that spark miraculous lights and
I dip in the oceans of dazzling ray and
manifest Thy lead to me onto the blaze
that overpower at the xeno-clouds chunk disappear,


and then


I embrace love pearls and
learn how Thou dissolve penumbra and
melt xen-reddish clouds
that I look into
thru' Thy gift
the vision in my sight,


thereafter,


I descry my limited days
onto the course bound
widely Thy sharpen
glistening my heart to sense the truth and
mirth of being prized,
the lust of mine fulfilled under Thy governance,


and further,


I bathe in responsibilities
contribute to thy desto' cause and
realize
Thou are unexplained
since
the maiden life,


again then,


Thou envision
to feel Thy illumination,
incessant care for my inclination
as part
of the job
endowed in my favor,


further then,


Thou reveal
Thy wonder rule
as witness
of the power limitless,


I feel and never surprise,


how quietly
Thou help me prized
the pride name in Thy grandeur
and I recall
my reporting dawn
leaving this mort' abode,


and I appreciate,


Thy cardinal rule ain't able to show Thy grace,


then I rem'


Thy gifts of expressions
to be disbelieved, discarded or treated
crazy fictional in vain,


but I see this is for Thy graced hearts to comprehend.











 



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Please read this Author Notes in order to save our resources and with an object to save our precious time



This is not about me, be sure, this is not to hurt you, rightly, this is an experience shared; this is expressed as you wished; you expected three things -- an artistic poem on God, a large poem on God, a challenge poem;


Yes, this is a challenge poem, as you wished, please read and find how far you get joy, pleasure and enjoyment in the read and experience how far I have been able to satisfy your expectation


Right, you are about to read a challenge poem indeed; you expected a large, artistic poem on experience of God; here it is; your discretion is solicited; this is not a mix of old and new English, I have composed this in the style truly to give you more pleasure and enjoyment; this is an independent Chapter of the Book



He prayed and God prized him. He knows none but the God blessed can easily realize, feel and appreciate the truth



Thou (God addressed as You) and Thy (God addressed as Your) used but not as part of Old English, archaic or obsolete words, poetic license used so other words like art, canst, doth not used


Lesser punctuation is intentional and purposive


Please read this poem as a complete sentence


Whene'er = whenever
Rem' = remember
Desto' = Destined
Mort' = mortal
Xen or Xeno = strange; foreign
Chicanery = trickery or sharp practices
Adumbrate = to foreshadow; to overshadow
Penumbra = partial or lighter shadow round the perfect or darker shadow


*The background I will edit and include, now I am unable to do this, I'm sorry for the inconvenience, I have now given the edited background above*


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