General Poetry posted January 5, 2020

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Ocean Experience

by Y. M. Roger

hypnotic wave crests
‘midst rhythmic susurrations ~
nature’s sleep machine


5-7-5 Ocean Poem writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a 5-7-5 poem with three lines where line one has 5 syllables, line two has 7 syllables and line three has 5 syllables. The topic is the ocean.

Susurration is a sound made with very little stirring of the vocal cords, resulting in the softest of sounds. The effect is as soft and calming as the word itself. This word is onomatopoeic, meaning it sounds like what it means: a susurration creates a sense of soft sound swirling around your ears pleasantly. []

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