Humor Fiction posted July 29, 2019 |
Bad Day at Black Rock
What's One More?
by pome lover
“Stupid alarm clock. No breakfast today. Late again! Terrific!”
(light turned on. Jed's cell phone rings.)
“Hey, Buddy! Where you been? Under a rock? Ha Ha. What? A boulder! On your car? You okay? Of course. I’ll let you know.” Terrific.
(at work. phone rings)
“Claims, Insley Insurance ,Jed Hines speaking. Oh, hello, Sir. Um, yessir, his car, total loss. Yessir. I know, sir. My third client claim this month. Yessir. Sorry, sir. Last one, I hope. Yessir. Good-bye. Sheesh!”
(phone rings)
“Claims, Oh, hi, son. Hate to tell me what! Oh! You okay? Well, that’s goo…in your Mom’s car???” (Sigh) Of course we have insurance, it’s just … Never mind. You can tell me how it wasn’t your fault when I get home, okay? Yes, I’ll talk to her. Bye.
Terrific!”
100 Word Story writing prompt entry
“Stupid alarm clock. No breakfast today. Late again! Terrific!”
(light turned on. Jed's cell phone rings.)
“Hey, Buddy! Where you been? Under a rock? Ha Ha. What? A boulder! On your car? You okay? Of course. I’ll let you know.” Terrific.
(at work. phone rings)
“Claims, Insley Insurance ,Jed Hines speaking. Oh, hello, Sir. Um, yessir, his car, total loss. Yessir. I know, sir. My third client claim this month. Yessir. Sorry, sir. Last one, I hope. Yessir. Good-bye. Sheesh!”
(phone rings)
“Claims, Oh, hi, son. Hate to tell me what! Oh! You okay? Well, that’s goo…in your Mom’s car???” (Sigh) Of course we have insurance, it’s just … Never mind. You can tell me how it wasn’t your fault when I get home, okay? Yes, I’ll talk to her. Bye.
Terrific!”
Writing Prompt Write a story that is between 100 and 150 words. The trick is you must use the following words: breakfast, light, rock, phone, clock |
Bad Day at Black Rock was name of an old western movie - just thought it was kind of appropriate.
in case it needs explaining - he's a claims adjuster for an insurance company and he turned in his 3rd client claim for a totaled car that month. and then, his son....
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and 2 member cents. in case it needs explaining - he's a claims adjuster for an insurance company and he turned in his 3rd client claim for a totaled car that month. and then, his son....
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