General Poetry posted May 8, 2019


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Your warmth is always the right answer

Healing Love

by Flyaway1

The dark leaves
when you hold me tight.
Hold me now.



3-5-3 writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a 3-5-3 syllable poem. It has three lines. The first line has 3 syllables, the second one 5 syllables and the last line 3 syllables. The subject can be anything.


I may think that my husband does not see me, until he holds me tight and gives me the warmth of his body. The cold and aches of bipolar depression start to heal under his love, The pain recedes and I fall asleep. He quietly leaves me to rest as long as I need. He can not fix me or cure me. He stays and eases my days, (22 years married )
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