General Poetry posted April 15, 2019 Chapters:  ...19 20 -21- 22... 


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A chapter in the book Poetic Treasures and Dreams

White Scars, Black Scars

by dovemarie

White
Scarred land
Patches of
Snow with ice floes
Icicles crackling
Grayish-white water streams
Frosted piece of melting snow
Flakes lacing magnificent pines
White scars like backs of elderly hands
First greenery cuts through snow particles

I see the black-scarred wastelands unfolding
Dark stalks of leafless trees shadow skies
Deep, rich, black, fertile soil awaits
The farmer's seed, hoe and plow
Newly-paved, tar-topped roads
Crows and blackbirds fly
The charred remains
Of burnt twigs
Tarnished
Scars




This poem was inspired by the beautiful sights I see of winter waning away and spring coming close. Thanks to cakemp55 for artwork.
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