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Suffering Commentary My Freestyle Rhythmic Form

A chapter in the book Pappa's Memories and Ramblings

Human's are Suffering

by QC Poet

On the net today - I conducted a search on a topic called Human Suffering, that left me distressed,
As humans we're all suffering but not like I guessed.
There's people who suffer from too much success,
while other's who suffer from the Oscar's, for not knowing how to dress.

Some people were suffering from eating too much food,
So many lost children suffering, you can call them a brood.
Other people are suffering to get their names on a show,
while all the homeless children and parents have nowhere to go.

They say there's starvation in Venezuela, I heard that today,
Even brought them out on cameras and television for the public to sway.
And of course there's still the hoards of Guatemalan's coming our way,
soon to be joined on the border, with other Brown Menaces that seem popular this day.
Depends on the Countries War leader and what they may say!

So Humanity is truly suffering and the reasons always vary,
for we pick and we choose how much weight each should carry.
What's popular today is quickly gone with the breeze,
Humanity stays Suffering when we choose as we Please!




Commentary Written in my freestyle rhythmic story telling format
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