Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted December 11, 2018

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Father Knew Best

by Y. M. Roger

Tyburn poetry Contest Winner 




Losing made me mainly, vainly cite

  that dad had been plainly, sanely right

Writing Prompt
Write a six line poem consisting of 2, 2, 2, 2, 9,9 syllables.
The first four lines rhyme and are all descriptive Word.
The two last lines rhyme and incorporate the first, second, third and four lines as the 5th through 8th syllables.

Sowing (2 syllables)
Hoeing (2 syllables)
Growing (2 syllables)
Mowing (2 syllables)

Planting gardens sowing, hoieng grounds (9 syllables)
Sunshine keeps all growing, mowing mounds (9 syllables)

Written by Marion Gibson

Tyburn poetry
Contest Winner

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