General Poetry posted December 2, 2018


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a lost love poem

scattered and torn

by judester

That cute little giggle
as you drew me near,
now grates like cold nails
on chalk to my ears.

Holding my hand,
tears run down your face,
now awkwardly clumsy,
It seems out of place.

The life that we shared,
your 'sorry' won't mend,
when I caught you messing
with one of my friends.

Now when I see you,
there is nothing but scorn.
That love and my trust,
lays scattered and torn.


 



When Love Dies writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a poem of any length or style about the ending of love. What happens when feelings change?


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