General Poetry posted November 4, 2018 Chapters:  ...12 13 -14- 15... 


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a poem about grief

A chapter in the book What Breaks My Heart

All I Can Do

by fm wright

I can see the tears that you are crying
as I watch your soul on the verge of dying.
Along with you I also am aching
while my body just like yours is quaking,
but yet all I can seem to do
is hold you and tell you that I love you.

I don't know how to take away the pain
that shows flowing down just like the falling rain.
I so much want to take the hurt away
and put sunshine back into your sky of gray,
but still all I can seem to do
is hold you and tell you that I love you.

Although I also have been hurt before;
this pain you are feeling is something much more.
I so deeply desire to understand
so please help me out if you possibly can.
There must be something I can do
than just hold you and tell you I love you.



Empathy with Grief writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a poem of any style that shows empathy for the grief of another human being. There are no line length requirements.


In times of grief I never know truly what to say.
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