~ His Final Breath ~

by PoemsOfDD

Silently it left without a struggle
together with the spirit that held on tight
until there was no longer a choice

Vicious void veils my heavy sorrow
life is empty beyond this heavy might
I wonder if it will ever lift...

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Sad Poems writing prompt entry

Writing Prompt
Sadness has overcome us all at one time or another. Either caused by a relative or close friend's death or from the girl or guy that broke our heart or just life in general. We all handle situations differently, some good, some bad. This contest gives us the ability to explore this. Your poem can also play into other emotions that are common to writing like this such as anger or depression.

For my father...

I took the picture in my garden.
The rose mirrored my expressions here.

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~ His Final Breath ~

by PoemsOfDD

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