General Poetry posted December 26, 2017


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Little girls twirls about catching snowflakes in her mouth

Snowflake Dance

by HarryT

Sedoka Poem Contest Winner 
White flakes swirling down
girl twirls among the snowdrops
mouth open catching crystals
 
Mom watches smiling
remembers big snowball fights
snowmen and snow angel fun
 

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Write a sedoka poem. A sedoka consists of two unrhymed three-line stanzas, each with a syllable count of 5 - 7 - 7.
Often these stanzas go at the same subject from different perspectives, but that is not a requirement.
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