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Archie and the others set up camp.

A chapter in the book Humanity Project

Into the Desert - Part 2

by davisr (Rhonda)



Background
Archie and the others attempt to help Ayala find peace with their journey, and to build shelter from the approaching day.
End of last chapter:

"I don't know how to read the earth," Archie said. "I'm a city boy, remember?"

"I remember your father tried to teach you about nature, but you didn't listen well. You act like the spoiled child you were not raised to be."

"That's not true. I told you before, I work very hard."

"Is that what you were doing when you flipped your shiny red car, Archie? Working?"

"Yes, I was taking a research trip for a special committee I'm on in the Senate."

"At night, traveling at excessive speeds?"

Archie heard Ayala snort in mockery. He could tell she was enjoying watching him squirm.


The story continues:

"Native Americans say the Earth is our mother," Sani continued. "Seek her spirit, Archie, and she will help you dig your hole. Just relax and let the environment caress your senses. Breathe in, breathe out...  picture a large hole in the ground, one so deep we can all hide inside comfortably. Tell me when you see it."

Archie fidgeted for a while, then settled down. "Okay, I see it."

"Good, now place yourself in it. Tell me when you're there."

A few seconds passed, and then a few more as Archie wrestled with impatience. Finally, he spoke.

"Okay, I'm in the hole."

"Good, now imagine the spade separating grains of sand like a knife whittling though layers of wood. Do you see them?"

"Yes, I do."

"Then you're ready. Open your eyes and find those grains. Start digging and don't stop until you have the hole you imagined."

"Just like that?"

"Just like that."

"What will you do?"

"I'll help the girls weave a grass blanket to cover your hole." Sani pulled out a sharp knife and cut Ayala loose with several smooth strokes.

"Come, child," he said. "You're so angry, and that's not good for your disposition or health. It'll sap your strength more quickly than the desert sun. Do you need to help Archie dig to calm your emotions?"

"That won't be necessary." Ayala glared at Archie, who held a hand up defensively.

"I wouldn't give her a shovel right now," he said.

"Oh, she'll be fine." Sani patted her on the arm.

"Really, how do you figure that?" Ayala quipped. "I was attacked by Archie, trussed up like a common animal, and dragged into this disease infested desert against my will."

"Yes, but at least you're out of that horrible prison," Sani reminded her.

"Hokee is my home."

"Most prisons are, but you're much too lovely a dove to stay in a cage."

"Dove! You should have seen her fighting earlier," Archie snorted. "She was more like a red-tailed hawk."

"I'm no hawk." Ayala's voice dripped with contempt.

"You could have fooled me," Koko said. "You turned Todd in to the Hawk Kin for having animal dreams, and now he's in the mines."

"I told you that wasn't me, and you don't know for sure where he is."

"Yes, we do. Archie and I found a book listing all the people who were sent there, and guess what? Todd's name's on the list."

Ayala's face clouded with concern. "Oh, Koko, I'm so sorry, but I promise it wasn't me who told on him. I wouldn't do that."

"Really? You threatened to turn me in."

"I didn't mean it. You know I didn't. I was frustrated because I couldn't figure out what was going on, and still can't. This whole escape thing is entirely out of character, Koko. You know what's happened to those who've tried it before."

"Yes, they've either ended up dead or in the mines, but that's not going to happen to us."

"You don't know that, and now you've condemned us to the same fate as the others."

"We'll do everything to make sure that doesn't happen," Sani interjected.

"How?"

"For one thing, you have me. I'm very knowledgable about survival, and the Cougar and Hawk people are not. They were raised in Hokee with the rest of you."

"That is true."

"Yes, and another thing, we have Archie, who has connections in the outside world, and who's very strong."

"Eh, I'm not impressed."

Sani ignored her remark and went on. "Lastly, we have each other and can work as a team. The others who've tried escaping were alone."

"Are you sure?"

"Yes, Koko and I researched it. Now, come help us make a mat to cover the hole Archie's digging. It's essential we find shelter from the heat."

"I'll help you, but I hope Archie falls in and breaks his neck."

Archie looked up from digging. Dirt covered his body like a brown aura. "I didn't attack you, Ayala. I just put you in a wrestling hold, so I could tie you up. As I recall, it was you who assaulted me."

"Semantics."

"Doesn't matter, anyway," Archie said. "It was for your own good."

Ayala snarled and kicked dirt in his face. "That's for your own good, Nature Boy. It'll help you connect with the environment."

Archie chuckled and continued to dig. If the worst thing the lovely headmistress did was kick dirt on him, he was fortunate. He planned to keep the spade well out of her reach.

"You're doing good, young man," Sani commented. "Just remember, the people of Hokee are orphans who were placed in a compound as babies and treated as experimental subjects. You were sent here to rescue them, son."

"I mean no disrespect, but I wasn't sent. I was involved in a wreck and carried to Hokee unconscious."

"You don't think you discovered these people by mistake do you, or that Ayala and her class found you by happenstance?"

"I assure you, I didn't do it on purpose."

"Yours isn't the only purpose at work," Sani said. "You were born to be a leader and rescuer. You've known that all your life. Am I wrong?"

Archie threw a shovelful of dirt over his shoulder, then paused to think. "No, of course you're not wrong, but I'm a senator from Texas, not New Mexico, and I assure you, I have plenty of leadership opportunities there."

"The Earth recognizes no political boundaries, only the cries of her children."

"What cries?" Ayala asked. "Our people are happy."

"Really? Then, I guess I'm wrong." Sani looked Ayala straight in her eyes and held her gaze until she glanced away.

"Now," he continued, "to make things right, Archie, ask Ayala, nicely, if she wants to travel with you to civilization."

Archie looked at Sani with his mouth agape.

Sani raised a parental eyebrow and said nothing.

"Fine. Ayala, would you, please, go with me and Koko to my world where she can get help delivering a baby your people would want to kill? You said you didn't know what was going on with Koko, but it took me under five minutes to figure it out."

Ayala paused before discharging a scathing remark, as the enormity of what Archie had revealed soaked in. She took a deep breath and turned to her sister.



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A special thanks for the beautiful artwork, "Topographical Terrain" by SCHATZLING

Summary of the book so far:

Archie Franklin is a United States Senator from the State of Texas. He's also the President's son.
He was traveling the west, scoping out New Mexico for a committee he was on, when a deer ran in front of his Ferrari and caused him to crash.

He was rescued from the desert by a group from a cult-like village called Hokee. In this town, the people are part of an experiment to improve the human condition by taking orphans and raising them isolated from many of the modern conveniences that make mankind weak.

The children, as young as 5, are placed in houses named after animals, but otherwise taught animals are dangerous and unclean. Each "house" has a particular job in the community based on the attributes of the representative animal.

The leader, Leander, chooses what children are brought to the village. He doesn't want anyone to know about the compound so they can maintain isolation. Archie is now a prisoner, but has befriended a young lady, Koko, whose husband has come up missing, and is assumed imprisoned in a penal mining colony.

Working against odds, the two hope to escape and protect Koko's unborn child. Having babies at stage one of the experiment is forbidden by the scientists in charge. Teens are sterilized at puberty to avoid pregnancies, but occasionally one will be conceived. Standard operating procedure is to perform an abortion, but Koko is willing to fight against all she's grown up to believe to give her child a chance at life.

Now, Archie, Koko and Sani have escaped the complex after the old miner, Sani set off an explosive distraction. On the way through a fence, they ran into Ayala, Koko's "sister" who tried to stop them. In order to ensure her silence, they tied her up and took her with them.

These are the 12 houses of Hokee:

Hawk: Where Leander Jr. lives. They are the strict rulers of the compound, answerable only to Leander Sr..

Cougar: The strong arms of the Hawks. They dish out whatever punishment is required, even to sending miscreants to another settlement they have up North in the mines.

Coyote: The one Archie and Ayala are in: Job: Teachers and professors. Allowed more knowledge of the "outside world".

Ant: Considered unclean, these people tend meat and fur animals outside the village

Tarantula: Architects, and menders

Donkey: Transportation and communication

Wasp: Prepare and serve food

Deer: Sports and entertainment

Hare: Make and distribute clothing

Rat: Childcare

Snake: healthcare

Buzzards: Clean up crew, maintain sewer and custodial chores


General Summary of the Book:

Young Texas Senator, Archie Franklin, finds himself marooned in the desert with a group of people who are more than they appear to be on the surface.

Hokee: Name of the village Archie is held in. It means, "The abandoned."

Characters:

Archimedes (Archie) Franklin: High energy, main protagonist, who is, also, a Senator from Texas, and son of the President of the United States, Andrew Franklin.

Ayala: Female head of household in the house Archie finds himself imprisoned.

Andrew (Andy) Franklin: President of the United States, and father of Archie.

Koko: Ayala's best friend in Coyote House, close as sisters, born on the same day.

Todd: Koko's husband

Sani: Old man. Used to be a miner up north. Another trapped refugee from the desert. An ally in the quest to escape.

Leander: Head scientist in charge of the structure of Hokee. His son, Leander, is in charge of daily operations.

Junior: Leander's son, who lives in the Hawk house. He's personally a coward, but rules Hokee with an iron fist.

Others to be listed as they appear in the book.
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