Letters and Diary Poetry posted January 3, 2017


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Weak

by Luna


To Mickey, with love.

Reminiscing our encounters,
 long hot and, sultry nights,
Seized my heart
yet you mislaid it.
 
Wretchedly yours,
pretending
you were mine.

Bewitching and coquettish voice
transformed your melancholy eye,
explaining that we would be three,
 
To second place I was resigned.

I pricked my finger on a rose
piercing thorns drew blood for you.

To occupy my one true place,
I’d kneel before your feet again.

It's only you (I feel your sting)
It’s only you (my place is true)
It’s only you (submission’s whip)
It's only you (command me)
 

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I'm sure glad to be back! I've been in the hospital since the day after Christmas. All issues have been pretty much resolved and I'm looking forward to, and wishing you all, a happy, healthy and prosperous 2017!

This free verse is just something that entered my mind. (Thank you, Jim, and thanks as well to Lillia for the use of the picture!)
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