General Poetry posted December 14, 2016


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Path Finding

by BlueMarble

Bubbling and laughing
The river flows gently by
I watch with a sigh

Water from the streams
The lakes the marsh and the brook
Join the path it took

Rivers know the way
Waters always find the sea
It's their destiny

On the other hand
I must stumble on the land
Finding my own path

Tripping on debris
Seeking trails that will take me
To eternity


 



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