General Poetry posted September 22, 2016

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Brown eyes

by Susanjohn

Brown eyes

Transfixing soulful gaze
Filled with wonderment and mys'try
Purest essence radiating within
The heart of an innocent child
Mesmerizing Angel

Brown eyes


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Writing Prompt
A rictameter has 9 lines with a syllable count of 2, 4, 6, 8, 10, 8, 6, 4, 2, with the last lines word/s identical to the first. Rhyming is not needed.
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