General Poetry posted September 22, 2016


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Rictameter

Brown eyes

by Susanjohn


Brown eyes
Captivating

Transfixing soulful gaze
Filled with wonderment and mys'try
Purest essence radiating within
The heart of an innocent child
Mesmerizing Angel

Contemplating
Brown eyes



 

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A rictameter has 9 lines with a syllable count of 2, 4, 6, 8, 10, 8, 6, 4, 2, with the last lines word/s identical to the first. Rhyming is not needed.
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