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A children's fairytale about bad fruits..

A chapter in the book ShedMoreTears Fairy Tales@Fables"

Cherry Pit, Louie Lemon,and Grapes!

by Ricky1024




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Follows with this amazing fairytale ...
"Superstition!"
"Cherry Pit, Louie Lemon, and Soured Grapes"
By Ricky1024.
Written on July 30rh, 2016 at 2:10 PM.EST.
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"The Saint Vincent's Orchard is a sight to see!"
"Care after care of Plush, fruit, retiree!"
"Surrounded on all sides by Highway 35 I'm Southern California."
...
"The Saint Vincent's Orchard grows a fine Variety of fruits from Sunkist Navels to Vilamer grapes."
They have been in the Grape business, now, for seventy- five years."
...
"The Saint Vincent's Orchard has won 'California's Southern Orchard Gold Ribbon every year since creation."
...
And, in the year 1972 The Orchard was besiigned by a Nasty Plight!"
"It was so bad, they lost almost everything except the cherries, lemons, and grapes!"
"And, this is where this fairytale and fable, begins!"
...
"Thank ye all Ricky boy there, but I can take it from here!"
"And, welcome back to Fanstory,and my book... "Shed A Tear Fairyrtales and Fables!"
"And yes, I wrote this book!"
(The first one of Two) .
To be continued later today...
RICKY1024 gggg/
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Annie?
"I giggle!"
"Oh, my story for today?"
"It's all,about rotten fruits called...
'Cherry Pit, Louie Lemon, and Scoured Grapes!"
"That's 'SOURED' ANNIE!"
"Okay, okay, OKAY,RICKY!"
"Smartie Pantaloons!"
"Tee Hee!"
...
"So, I danged didn't writ it!"
She yells!
"It's stupid anyhow!"
"But, I'll still read it for you all Ricky cause your birthday is just around the corner, you old hoot!"
"And, I will,see you at the end for...
"The Lesson of The Day!"
Annie...
...
"Reviewers, is she gone yet?"
"Good!"
"Now let's get this completed I'm even anxious to,see what message God wl give me!"
....
"So, ' THE PKIGHT' really hurt Saint Vincent's Orchard."
"But why, why Saint Vincients Vincent and not Saint Johns or Saint Peters only a couple of miles away?"
"Meanwhile...
...
"Louie?"
Yes Cherry Pit?
"Did we do good?"
She asks.
"Yes Cherry, we caused all those Ugly and Sour, Naval trees to die!"
"What about the grapes?Asks Cherry.
"Yes, those too Cherry!"
He brags.
...
"Now, we have an opportunity to spread our roots!"
States Louie.
"And grow!"
Adds Cherry.
"Good idea then?"
Adds Soured Grapes.
"Yes Soured good idea."
"We were not welcomed in Clarkston, Nebraska."
(Too many Corn Farmers there)
"And, here it is much nicer!"
States Cherry Pit.
"The climate is moderate and the highway is far off." "So, we don't get those nasty fumes from those crazy humans in their crazy, traveling, devices."
...
"Time passes and soon the Orchard is filled with mainly Cherry Trees!"
"Cherry Pit claimed most of the plots to spread her Pits!"
"Soured Grapes and Louie Lemon took the rest!"
"After about a year...
...
"Saint Vincent was so upset he did nothing but,cry each and every day!"
"So, He said a prayer...
...
"Dear Lord above...
"I can no longer grow what I Love?"
"No more Navel's, Viamer Grapes, no more Caintaline Cantaloupes or Sugar Baby melons!"
"And, The Lord replied...
...
"Saint Vincent, you are a good man who had been victimized by...
"An Evil...
"Way beyond your control!"
"Unfortunately, For you this is path you must now tred...
"And...
"Carefully!"
"And the Lord replied again...
...
Dear Saint Vincent,
"Many scoured a place so large and grand!"
"And many tried but failed...
"Miserably!"
"So, someone or something came...
"And they poisoned and spread their seed...
"Quite magnificently...
"And they are quite Evil yes...
"Evil indeed!"

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"Lord, why hath thou then forsakened me?"
"Pray Saint Vincent and Only then...
"Can I send...
"A Blessing...
...
"Two long weeks passed and suddenly a Miracle happens!"
...
"The sky turns an Eerie Hue of Red and Blue!"
"Tremendous Lightning crashes to the ground and Thunder Roars!"
...
"The town's people run for cover as Torrential rains flood The ground!"
"And, then they are soon pelted by 'Golf Ball Size Hail!"
"Many, many, things are damaged and gone...
...
"And many leave the town but...
"Saint Vincent looks out and sees...
"An amazing Sight!"
"His Orchard ravaged by those Evil trees are cleared away?"
"And in there place...
"Is the Miracle of Grace!"
"A miracle that He so desperately needs...
"The most beautiful Orchard trees!"
"Sunkist Navels plumped and Pumped And Cloaked!"
"Melons and Lopes so vast...
"The ground is Choked!"
...
"And Wonder full Grape Vines stretched as far as the eye can see!"
The End.
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"Wow, Ricky you did it again!"
"I'm crying my ass off!"
"Pardon my French!"
"And now...
"The for...
"The Lesson of The Day?"
"JUST PRAY!"
"And, pray like there is no tomorrow!"
See yea when Ricky presents...
"The Candle Stick that Couldn't See!"







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Follows with......... "Superstition!"
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