General Poetry posted May 26, 2016 Chapters:  ...23 24 -25- 26... 


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A chapter in the book Miscellaneous Poems Vol 2

Turn off your lights

by CD Richards


The stars shine proudly in the sky;
turn off your lights.
Is that a comet sailing by?
This neon bites.
Do not deny my right to reap
the treasures of the heavens deep.
For love of crisp, clear, crystal nights
turn off your lights.

The loss of darkness makes me cry—
gives me the shites.
Each nebula I bid goodbye
my wrath ignites.
Your wicked incandescent glare
obscures my view, but do you care?
Restore my wondrous dark sky sights;
turn off your lights.



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The octogram is a form created by Fanstorian, Sally Yokom. There are two stanzas. Syllable sequence per line is 84848884 84848884. Rhyme scheme is aBabccbB ababddbB. Capital B indicates an exact repeated line.

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