General Poetry posted November 13, 2015


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multiple floral attributes of my mom

My Mom Could Never Be A Flower

by jaho58

If my mom were a flower
She'd be a classic rose--
Timeless, elegant,
Pleasing eye and nose.

Magical! Spontaneous!
Like the changing dandelion,
So much fun to play with,
Sending laughter flyin'.

Or perhaps a pretty crocus,
With colors all aglow--
Surprising! Optimistic!
Pushing cheerily through the snow.

Or a pure and spiritual lily
Whose heart you cannot harden......
No, my mom could never be a flower
She's too much of a garden
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