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My very favourite ornament

A chapter in the book Christine's Poems

My 'Statue of David'

by Chrissy710

My 'statue of David' is my favourite thing
He is solid marble, much joy does he bring.
I bought him in Florence a long time ago
My kids never touched him this rule they did know

For if he gets broken, you'd better now run
Return at your peril, to this angry Mum
So he's lasted 3 children and 4 grandies too
I know they all 'love' him, so sure that they do..

But when I've departed, have gone to my grave
Who now will just get him, They'll have to be brave.
'Cause if he's not cherished and takes 'pride of place'
I'll haunt them forever and show them my face.

So while I still have him, he stands in my hall
To greet all the people and show them his all.
Sometimes I hear giggles, when they walk on by
His nakedness shocks them, they cover their eye.

But to me he's quite georgous a real work of art
Michaelangelo' s a legend his genius impart
And so that is my thing' I can write about
My 'statue of David' so check him right out





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My statue of David is my favourite thing I bought him in Florence in 1977 while on a 6 months travel around Europe holiday with my husband and friends. We had a CamperVan and had a ball going 'everywhere', great memories. I loved David and I purchased this one in a little souviner shop about 100 yards from where the real Statue is housed and have treasured him ever since. My kids all grew up with the threat of never to return if they broke it. So he has survived but now they all want him when I do go ( hopefully not for a long time yet) so I think I will have to do a blind draw for the winner or custodian lol. Hope you enjoy my little poem
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