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A chapter in the book Poetry

Luna of the night

by Jackarrie



oh moon of pale gold, luna of the night
magnificently radiant above
through a misty veil of silken gauze
ethereal light shines a zealous glow
milky way stars adorn this stunning scene
yet no living artist could ever create
 phases that influenced so long ago

twas our ancestors calendar for free
in the dark of night a crystalline orb
a welcome companion, a lover's view
behind gloomy clouds  your powers still so strong
security is bestowed because of your tenacity
keeping us safe from high tides of the seas
oh moon of pale gold, luna of the night

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Blank Verse Poetry Contest contest entry


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