General Poetry posted June 27, 2015

RodG

I taught English for 40 years on the high school and college level. Since retiring, I have written a poetry collection titled "Reflections of a Dog Walker," and five novels, all unpublished. I mostly post poems and short stories.
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Where is paradise?

haiku (shrouded peaks arise)

by RodG

shrouded peaks arise
as mist lifts from glassy lake
Eden awakens

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haiku - mist, fog, smog or haze writing prompt entry

Writing Prompt
Write a haiku about mist, fog, smog or haze
(not of the mind)

-17 syllables or less
-two lines of grammatically interconnected concrete imagery
-a satori line of reflection or observation
-a kigo, seasonal reference
-personification allowed
-artwork allowed but poem must stand alone
-no author's notes
-short-long-short format
-title must be: haiku (first line of poem)
-minimal punctuation and capitalization
-no strict end rhymes

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Where is paradise?

haiku (shrouded peaks arise)

by RodG

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