Humor Poetry posted June 6, 2015


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Rictameter

You Said

by kiwisteveh




You said

that we'd be wed.

The birds sang overhead.

We'd honeymoon upon the Med.

The date marked on the calendar in red.

But then I found you in the shed,

embracing my friend Ted.

"Our love is dead,"

you said!

 

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A rictameter has 9 lines with a syllable count of 2, 4, 6, 8, 10, 8, 6, 4, 2, with the last lines word/s identical to the first. Rhyming is not needed.
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