General Poetry posted May 7, 2015


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another little love poem

I'm loving you

by judester

I'm loving you,
still loving me.
Our whirlpool of love,
that swirls constantly.

I'm loving you,
and soft breezes blow,
under the stars
we kiss and I know,

just like that ocean,
endless and blue,
as faithful as waves...
I'm loving you.







Repetition writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a poem of any type. It must have at least three stanzas. And one line in the poem must repeat in every stanza.


Thanks to liilia for the great illustration. My husband met up with me in Zanzibar and walking down the star lit beach, I thought of our twenty years together.
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