| General Flash Fiction posted April 3, 2015 |
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100 word dash contest
Beautiful Mouth
by jmdg1954
100 Word Dash Contest Winner
She opened her mouth, shut her eyes. He held her head, not wanting her to gag. His first penetrating move went through her like a wave. She quivered. Never has a prick felt like that. It wouldn't take him long. It never did.
The next prick was a little bigger, she briefly gagged. "Don't swallow this time," he said.
Her heart rate increased. Her jaw muscles twitched. Finally, it was over. She opened her eyes. He smiled at her and wiped her chin. Her eyes expressed satisfaction.
"See you in six months for another cleaning, Mrs. Clark?"
She opened her mouth, shut her eyes. He held her head, not wanting her to gag. His first penetrating move went through her like a wave. She quivered. Never has a prick felt like that. It wouldn't take him long. It never did.
The next prick was a little bigger, she briefly gagged. "Don't swallow this time," he said.
Her heart rate increased. Her jaw muscles twitched. Finally, it was over. She opened her eyes. He smiled at her and wiped her chin. Her eyes expressed satisfaction.
"See you in six months for another cleaning, Mrs. Clark?"
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Writing Prompt Take flash fiction to the extreme. Can you tell a complete story in just 100 words. If so, this is your opportunity to shine. The story can be about any subject you wish, creative approaches are of course encouraged. All stories must have the following: Main Character, Setting, Conflict, Resolution. |
100 Word Dash Contest Winner |
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