Children Fiction posted March 19, 2015 | Chapters: | ...5 6 -7- 10... |
He needs a cure.
A chapter in the book ShedMoreTears Fairy Tales@Fables"
Eli the Sickly Caterpillar
by Ricky1024
Background Follows{after Part Number two another great "Shed More Tears Fairytales and Fables story called "Nancy the Wise but Nasty Cat!" |
"Eli the Sickly Caterpillar"
Part Number One
Ricky1024 Written on March 19th, 2015 at 10:00AM.
Characters-
A-Eli the sickly caterpillar.
B-Mommy {his mother}.
C-Remuse the wise prophet.
D- 'The Great Caterpillar God!
"How can I find some help mommy for I can't live like this anymore!"
"Always and forever...
"Always not matter how clever...
"And always I try but for some reason mommy...
"I'm always sick...
"Inside...
...
"Welcome again back to Fan story and to Ricky's newest "Shed More Tears Fairytales and Fables!"
"My name is Annie...
"Annie Oakley the greatest sharp-shooter west of the Mississippi!"
"Today's tale is about a very ill caterpillar named Eli who is searching for a cure cow kids!"
"Let's hope he finds it before he dies!"
"Bye ye-all cow kids and reviewers and see yea-all at the end for the review!"
...
"Note- "Annie Oakley is a fictional character in my book and my narrator, however she really existed cow-kids and grandparents, a long time ago."
...
"It will be Ok Eli, just say a little prayer tonight ant perhaps the 'Caterpillar God' can help."
"I'll try mommy...
But Eli has a bad problem with that because he is dysleckic and has other crippling problems besides his illness1"
...
"So Eli continues to try but was always sickly and throwing up his leave-juices!'"
"And also, Eli has little time left!'
"Can you pray {cow-kids and reviewers} for him?"
...
"So, on one fine and sunny day in the month of March before the Spring of May, Eli set off to search for a cure!"
"He traveled over hill and dale along the back of that old and trusty trail."
'He went to a town in a small village and met another very wise caterpillar names Remuse."
"And Remuse listened to Eli and gave him hope but the task would be difficult...
"Difficult indeed!"
...
"Eli, you must find the 'Golden Vine' in a town called Hope!"
"And you must eat from that vine for it contains 'The Great Caterpillar God's' cure!"
"I implore you to leave and not waste time as a prophet, you have very, very, little time left!"
"Leave my friend and good luck!"
...
"So Eli did as he was told and even remembered to say a little prayer...
"Please oh 'Holy and Great Caterpillar God!'
"Save me before it tiss...
"To late...
End Of Part Number One.
Part Number Two "Eli's Search for the Cure!"
"'A little later today as I have court.
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***********************************Part Number Two****************************************
"Eli...
"Eli...
"Eli?'
"Can you hear me?
Eli?
"Yes but who tiss this?
'This is 'The Great Caterpillar God!"
"and I will help you find the source of your cure!"
'Thank you 'Great caterpillar God' for I have been searching now and I am weak, sickly and afraid that I will pass soon...
...
"Yes my Son and that is why I am here...
"Know do exactly as I command!''
"Stay to the left of the 'Great Trail of Caterpillar Life!"
"Stray not for danger reeks!"
'Yes 'Great and Noble Caterpillar God!"
...
"So Eli follows the trail and stays to the left ever vigilant and ever weary of imminant danger."
"He see many, many, things like scary 'Ant Lions, fuzzy and sharp 'Teddy Bears,' clawed and dangerous and deadly, 'Shaggy Snap-a-puss's'
"He even sees a 'Fire Breathing Dragonfly!"
"Oh, me, oh, my I must not stray!"
...
"And after many, many hours, Eli finally finds 'The Golden Vine!'
"And this is where we shall end until the conclusion {part Number three}
'Eli's Fight for Life!"
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Part Number One
Ricky1024 Written on March 19th, 2015 at 10:00AM.
Characters-
A-Eli the sickly caterpillar.
B-Mommy {his mother}.
C-Remuse the wise prophet.
D- 'The Great Caterpillar God!
"How can I find some help mommy for I can't live like this anymore!"
"Always and forever...
"Always not matter how clever...
"And always I try but for some reason mommy...
"I'm always sick...
"Inside...
...
"Welcome again back to Fan story and to Ricky's newest "Shed More Tears Fairytales and Fables!"
"My name is Annie...
"Annie Oakley the greatest sharp-shooter west of the Mississippi!"
"Today's tale is about a very ill caterpillar named Eli who is searching for a cure cow kids!"
"Let's hope he finds it before he dies!"
"Bye ye-all cow kids and reviewers and see yea-all at the end for the review!"
...
"Note- "Annie Oakley is a fictional character in my book and my narrator, however she really existed cow-kids and grandparents, a long time ago."
...
"It will be Ok Eli, just say a little prayer tonight ant perhaps the 'Caterpillar God' can help."
"I'll try mommy...
But Eli has a bad problem with that because he is dysleckic and has other crippling problems besides his illness1"
...
"So Eli continues to try but was always sickly and throwing up his leave-juices!'"
"And also, Eli has little time left!'
"Can you pray {cow-kids and reviewers} for him?"
...
"So, on one fine and sunny day in the month of March before the Spring of May, Eli set off to search for a cure!"
"He traveled over hill and dale along the back of that old and trusty trail."
'He went to a town in a small village and met another very wise caterpillar names Remuse."
"And Remuse listened to Eli and gave him hope but the task would be difficult...
"Difficult indeed!"
...
"Eli, you must find the 'Golden Vine' in a town called Hope!"
"And you must eat from that vine for it contains 'The Great Caterpillar God's' cure!"
"I implore you to leave and not waste time as a prophet, you have very, very, little time left!"
"Leave my friend and good luck!"
...
"So Eli did as he was told and even remembered to say a little prayer...
"Please oh 'Holy and Great Caterpillar God!'
"Save me before it tiss...
"To late...
End Of Part Number One.
Part Number Two "Eli's Search for the Cure!"
"'A little later today as I have court.
24.
<><><><><><><><><><>"Eli's Search for the Cure!"<><><><><><><><><><><>
***********************************Part Number Two****************************************
"Eli...
"Eli...
"Eli?'
"Can you hear me?
Eli?
"Yes but who tiss this?
'This is 'The Great Caterpillar God!"
"and I will help you find the source of your cure!"
'Thank you 'Great caterpillar God' for I have been searching now and I am weak, sickly and afraid that I will pass soon...
...
"Yes my Son and that is why I am here...
"Know do exactly as I command!''
"Stay to the left of the 'Great Trail of Caterpillar Life!"
"Stray not for danger reeks!"
'Yes 'Great and Noble Caterpillar God!"
...
"So Eli follows the trail and stays to the left ever vigilant and ever weary of imminant danger."
"He see many, many, things like scary 'Ant Lions, fuzzy and sharp 'Teddy Bears,' clawed and dangerous and deadly, 'Shaggy Snap-a-puss's'
"He even sees a 'Fire Breathing Dragonfly!"
"Oh, me, oh, my I must not stray!"
...
"And after many, many hours, Eli finally finds 'The Golden Vine!'
"And this is where we shall end until the conclusion {part Number three}
'Eli's Fight for Life!"
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"Special thanks goes out first and always to Heavenly Father and his Son Jesus Christ, Fan Story, Fan Art Review and this great artist 'Websterjames' and his pic 'Caterpillar Beast!'
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