General Fiction posted March 18, 2015


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a short encounter that lasts a lifetime

Hello, Goodbye

by giraffmang















 
joyous tears abound
after years, a miracle
baby girl is born

 

A little cry.

"Hello, little one."

A worried look. Fast fingers. Phone call.

Questions asked. No answers. Sirens blared. Paramedics arrive. Mother and baby bundled up. Lights and noise. All speed spent.

Beep... Beep... Beep...

Incubator. ICU.

Day one - tests and hope.

Day two - tests and worried looks.

Day three - relatives arrive; situation explained.

Day four - tears and whispered conversations; decisions made.

Day five - a hug. A kiss. Tears. Flick of a switch.

"Goodbye"
 
in so little time
you said 'Hello' then 'Goodbye'
hearts touched forever



Choose One Of The Following Titles writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Here we go again! This time the prompt is inspired by hits from The Beatles!

Choose one of the following titles.

Where does it take you?

Get writing: poem, fiction, essay, whatever you like!
200 words maximum word count.

Can't Buy Me Love
I Feel Fine
Yesterday
Paperback Writer
Eleanor Rigby
Hello, Goodbye
Come Together
The Long and Winding Road
Let it Be

The title of your work MUST be the title you chose from the list. (There shouldn't be any confusion in the booth for duplicate entries of title, as your name will be displayed alongside your entry.)

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ICU - intensive care unit
based on real events
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