naani (shoulders sag)

by Val Crisson

shoulders sag
as he looks for a bar
on a dimly lit city street
months of rehab left behind

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Naani Poetry contest entry

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I am so upset about the recent naani contest, that I am reposting this. This is a naani ... human reactions and NO RHYMING.

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