Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted August 19, 2014


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A Lune poem about the moon, 5-3-5 syllables

The moon and the sun

by robina1978

Moon gives light at night,
then goes 'way.
Sun appears instead.



Lune Poetry Contest contest entry

Recognized


Many thanks to Moonwillow for the beautiful art.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.

Artwork by MoonWillow at FanArtReview.com

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