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...and Jill came tumbling after.
A chapter in the book Tiny Terrors
Jack & Jill
by Dean Kuch
Her horror began with strange gurgling sounds that echoed deep within the crumbling, ancient well.
Jill approached cautiously, but saw nothing.
The full moon ducked behind a cloud. It was then she felt them touch her. Gnarled, wet hands — alabaster pale — from the well.
It was Jack.
He'd come home.
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Her horror began with strange gurgling sounds that echoed deep within the crumbling, ancient well.
Jill approached cautiously, but saw nothing.
The full moon ducked behind a cloud. It was then she felt them touch her. Gnarled, wet hands — alabaster pale — from the well.
It was Jack.
He'd come home.
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