General Poetry posted June 17, 2014


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Sailing through tranquil seas

haiku ( as compass holds sway )

by Dean Kuch

as compass holds sway 

'neath spring's cerulean skies


only one sails blue




Putting the Satori First Haiku writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Many haiku are written with the 'line of insight' or Satori, as it's called, coming at the beginning of the poem. Write a traditional nature haiku in 17 syllables OR LESS, putting the Satori in the first line. SEE EXAMPLES FOR HELP.

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