General Poetry posted April 6, 2014


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A call to The Holy Spirit

Simple Desire

by Yvon

Divine
Garden of light
Unbind the passages
Open up love's sacred canals
Unshackle the truth to grant freedom's plea
Wisdom, penetrate the darkness
Mystic awareness, shine
Silence of dawn
Divine

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Writing Prompt
A rictameter has 9 lines with a syllable count of 2, 4, 6, 8, 10, 8, 6, 4, 2, with the last line's word/s identical to the first. Rhyming is not needed.


Thanks to GaliaG for the art work. It was tougher to come up with the title than to write the poem.
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