General Poetry posted March 23, 2014


Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
it describes phases of pain we go through

cry

by noralene

.After you cry and cry
.And your tears go dry
.You don't know how you feel or what to say but you feel you'd rather die
.No matter what to do or what you try you still feel empty and cold inside
.there were a shock and tears then you went all calm
.you wonder what feeling you are about to sink inside
.you feel like you're drawning and a shark attacks you after shark but you won't die
.you claim you're good but you're telling a lie
.you wonder when all this will be over and so do I



5-7-5 Poetry Contest contest entry
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


Save to Bookcase Promote This Share or Bookmark
Print It View Reviews

You need to login or register to write reviews. It's quick! We only ask four questions to new members.


© Copyright 2024. noralene All rights reserved.
noralene has granted FanStory.com, its affiliates and its syndicates non-exclusive rights to display this work.