General Fiction posted March 10, 2014 |
flash fiction
check please
by judester
My sister and I went for dinner one evening at a Greek restaurant. We were served by two very attentive and handsome waiters. It was fun to flirt and chat with them.
I went to get my coat. Suddenly,my cute waiter came up from behind and pushed me to the wall with a hard and passionate kiss. He didn't say a word.
I knew that it was wrong, but it just felt so right. That was the sexiest,breathtaking kiss I have ever shared.
The sounds of the kitchen and diners nearby, made it all that more exciting and clandestine.
Check,please!
100 Word Dash writing prompt entry
My sister and I went for dinner one evening at a Greek restaurant. We were served by two very attentive and handsome waiters. It was fun to flirt and chat with them.
I went to get my coat. Suddenly,my cute waiter came up from behind and pushed me to the wall with a hard and passionate kiss. He didn't say a word.
I knew that it was wrong, but it just felt so right. That was the sexiest,breathtaking kiss I have ever shared.
The sounds of the kitchen and diners nearby, made it all that more exciting and clandestine.
Check,please!
I went to get my coat. Suddenly,my cute waiter came up from behind and pushed me to the wall with a hard and passionate kiss. He didn't say a word.
I knew that it was wrong, but it just felt so right. That was the sexiest,breathtaking kiss I have ever shared.
The sounds of the kitchen and diners nearby, made it all that more exciting and clandestine.
Check,please!
Writing Prompt Topic: A first kiss between strangers. Let's take flash fiction to the extreme. Can you tell a complete story with just 100 words. If so this is your opportunity to shine. |
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