General Fiction posted March 10, 2014


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by judester

My sister and I went for dinner one evening at a Greek restaurant. We were served by two very attentive and handsome waiters. It was fun to flirt and chat with them.
I went to get my coat. Suddenly,my cute waiter came up from behind and pushed me to the wall with a hard and passionate kiss. He didn't say a word.
I knew that it was wrong, but it just felt so right. That was the sexiest,breathtaking kiss I have ever shared.
The sounds of the kitchen and diners nearby, made it all that more exciting and clandestine.
Check,please!



100 Word Dash writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Topic: A first kiss between strangers.

Let's take flash fiction to the extreme. Can you tell a complete story with just 100 words. If so this is your opportunity to shine.



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