Biographical Poetry posted February 6, 2014 |
The beginning and the end
Bookends
by Marillion
I In my despair, I spied you there, but failed to rise and speak— An inner scream escaped a dream, and vocalized a squeak. You heard it, turned, and then discerned the sorely-needed word, A pleasantry to quicken me with honey, dripped and purred. "Hello", it was, and sweet because of all it may contain— A friendship earned, attraction learned, and verbal sugar-cane. II When last we spoke, you tried to choke a word inside your throat, But out it came, attached to blame, and struck a sour note. You'd loaded first and, unrehearsed, dispatched a crooked shot, A wintry sort of cruel retort, but interjected hot. That final scene, the drama queen surrendered love to die— The stage was dimmed, the show condemned, and ended with "Good-bye." |
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This could be formatted as an 8-6-8-6 quatrain, or as couplets in iambic hectameter with internal rhymes in the 2nd and 4th metrical foot, and at the end of the line. I chose the longer lines this time.
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