| Spiritual Poetry posted January 4, 2014 |
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A much modified triolet
Looking Back
by Peter@Poole
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One day I walked the beach we knew, recalled our walking hand in hand, with gulls and waders in full view. Again, I walked the beach we knew, and saw our life in fond review, a life that many years had spanned. How good to walk the beach we knew, which of life's fabric formed a strand. |
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Well, I intended to write a triolet, but it cried out for modification.
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