General Fiction posted January 3, 2014


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A father and his children after a marriage break down

Dad-(60 word dash)

by magic dragon

"You've finally arrived." "I was worried sick." "The children were to be brought back by 3pm not 4.30pm." "Why didn't you answer your phone?"

"Don't panic Sheila, I usually bring the boys back on time, but they were having so much fun building sandcastles."

"Go shower boys, dinner will be ready soon."

"Bye dad."

"David, next visit on time please."




60 WORD DASH writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Tell a complete story using 60 words or under.


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