General Fiction posted September 14, 2013


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Wet Spot

by joann r romei

Papa Jim sat on his beach chair downing cold beers.

He commented to his family, "Now this is my idea of a vacation."

The kids needed to cool off, so they grabbed their boogie boards and headed into the choppy water. They splashed and swam for the remainder of the afternoon. At one point, they noticed their father saunter into the water for a quick swim, then head directly back to his chair.

Later on while lounging out on dry towels, the kids remarked how refreshing the ocean water was.

Papa Jim cracked open another beer and said, "Yeah, convenient too..."



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Write a story of 100 words. not including the title. Any subject accepted. Must be exactly 100 words.

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