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the warmth of winds, the warmth of love ... and loss
A chapter in the book All Those Puzzling Pieces
As Trade Winds Sing
by visionary1234
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As tradewinds sing through silken air and palm fronds whisper softest prayer, by ocean’s pounding, frothy blue on soft-spun sand, I smile at you, and slide my fingers through your hair. We dive down deep for corals rare; fluorescent fish are hiding there and sea-weed sways like tall bamboo as tradewinds sing. We play, as children … such a pair. Like ocean’s deep - our love affair sustains us till this day’s adieu. I cast your ashes high into the swirling skies, and two hearts tear - as tradewinds sing. |
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please pronounce "adieu" in the Westernized version, i.e. ad-YOO, not the French language pronunciation. :)
The rondeau is a 15 line poem in three verses. The first verse is composed of five 8 syllable lines with a rhyme scheme of AABBA. The second verse is composed of three 8 syllable lines with rhyme scheme of AAB followed by a shorter refrain line composed of the first words of the first line of verse 1. The third verse is composed of five 8 syllable lines with a rhyme scheme of AABBA followed by the same shorter refrain line.
This is my first attempt at a Rondeau!
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and 2 member cents. The rondeau is a 15 line poem in three verses. The first verse is composed of five 8 syllable lines with a rhyme scheme of AABBA. The second verse is composed of three 8 syllable lines with rhyme scheme of AAB followed by a shorter refrain line composed of the first words of the first line of verse 1. The third verse is composed of five 8 syllable lines with a rhyme scheme of AABBA followed by the same shorter refrain line.
This is my first attempt at a Rondeau!
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