General Poetry posted April 17, 2013


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A swim

by Allison78

You wrapped a towel
around me.
I was wet
from the
cold
dark lake,
the sun
was setting,
pinks, oranges
purples.
You enclosed
your warm arms around me,
while the sand
and the rocks
dug into my
bare feet.
The air and your
eyes gave me a chill.
We ran to the cabin
and took everything off.



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