General Poetry posted December 24, 2012


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(first flakes gently land)

haiku/senryu suite

by dejohnsrld (Debbie)

haiku/ senryu suite (first flakes gently land)

 

first flakes gently land

autumnal palette erased

winter blooms from fall

 

evergreens covered

fence posts topped with ice cold caps

snow decoration

 

gusty winds briskly

twirl fresh fallen hexagons

chilled ballerinas

 

frost creates etched glass

wind driven sleet parades streets

fireplace glow welcomed

 

cars negotiate

scalloped drifts line icy roads

havoc created

 

short days with long nights

appreciative young lovers

nighttime mystery

 

‘neath snow laden trees

moonlight reflects icy crust

wintertime mirror

 

squeals and laughter heard

children skate on frozen pond

Christmas vacation

 

white turns dirty gray

yet another layer falls

world is newly cleansed

 

colorful lights twinkle
pine trees dressed for the season
holidays are here





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