My Dad.

by Jaq Cee

Lying atop hospital bed,
is father looking half the man.
His colour is unhealthy red.
I almost ran.

It frightened me to see him there,
all huddled down, vulnerable.
If we can take him home I swear,
him, I'll cradle.

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The tetrabreve uses a four line stanza with an abbreviated fourth line. The required meter is 8-8-8-4. The rhyme scheme can be Aaaa, AaBb, ABab, ABCb, or ABba, but it MUST RHYME. A minimum of two stanzas is required but there is no maximum number.

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My Dad.

by Jaq Cee

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