| Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted October 22, 2012 | Chapters: |
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Everyone needs to know they've done enough.
A chapter in the book My Life in words
Who will weep?
by Jaq Cee
As the days
darkness dims on a life nearly spent Lack-lustre thoughts crowd my mind What have I left? What is my legacy? Will anyone weep at my grave? Looking back through life's album to the times I can recall I did my best. But was it enough? The question still remains. Will anyone weep at my grave? |
Couldn't sleep last night and jotted this down.
Free verse, intentional lack of punctuation. Just trying things to see how they look. All critique greatly appreciated.
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and 2 member cents. Free verse, intentional lack of punctuation. Just trying things to see how they look. All critique greatly appreciated.
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