Romance Poetry posted October 3, 2012 Chapters:  ...12 13 -14- 15... 


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steamy, dreamy in Paris
A chapter in the book All Those Puzzling Pieces

Alone in Paris

by visionary1234

Passionate Love in Black and White Contest Winner 

I don’t know you

Alone, in Paris
my stumbling French
makes you smile, I know you see me
I look away, before your brown eyes
stop my breathing,

slow my heartbeat
back to 
calm

 I don’t know you

Alone, in Paris
do please join me
at my table, help me order
in your language ... brush my hand
and fill my glass

zap!

I feel your heat
and draw away

breathe

slow

zap!

You feel it too
I know you do

I don’t know you

Alone, in Paris

the violinist
comes to our table, brings two roses
of scented velvet, drawn by our heat
we laugh, through half-closed eyes

and tell him
to
stay
play the world
for us
to dance to,
breast
to warm breast
 
I don't know you

Alone, in Paris
you pour champagne
and hold the glass, to my cheek
cool me down
so

wet

you

slowly

stroke

my

lips

and smile

as I stop breathing

I don't know you

Alone, in Paris
as candles sputter
our hands linger, like butterflies
on honey'd flowers, you kiss my fingers
first with lips
then your tongue
just
the tip

I don't know you

Alone, in Paris
I know you're luscious
like chocolate - try this one now
between my teeth
feel me ... taste me
breathe me in

I don't know you

Alone, in Paris
we split a peach
warm and soft, moist and dripping
you lean closer
and

slowly

lick

the

juice


I shudder
knowing

that dessert
is still
to come

Let me know you, I whisper

We're all alone ... in Paris



Writing Prompt
Write a passionate love poem, any style, any length. Try to make us feel the heat and passion of your lovers without being vulgar or blatant. It has to be clean enough so you don't need to put any warnings on your poem.


Passionate Love in Black and White
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looks long, but isn't! go have a cold shower afterwards!
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