Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted May 24, 2012 |
haiku (african haiku)
black toy
by ANENE NWACHUKWU M
black ju-ju dull black,
night in awesome my love dark, who crucify toy? |
5-7-5 Poetry contest entry
The author contribution to some understanding by revealing ,how much we can assume,irregardless of the future revelation ,pleading that he should not be taking at heart by critics,in the first line; he was praising the tool which, he is using in creating that is his black pen,in the second line;he was in mood of sadness praising the nature of himself,in last line he he affirm who can criticize his pen,in conclusion who will like to have a black dull baby in his room especially for a kid of four years,this poetry the author wrote out of afraid of criticism.love you all,it is philosophical natural.
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