General Fiction posted April 5, 2012


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Teenagers in a car

The Kiss

by joann r romei

Mom always said, Love is blind, but not deaf and dumb! I didn't care, because it was going to be puppy love for me. I was set up on a date with a stranger who picked me up in his orange Z28. I never had a traditional kiss , flush on the mouth before, like in the movies, where the man and woman close their eyes and keep their mouths shut. Before we took off, I took his face and placed my lips gently on his. Ugh, instantly I regretted it, because he burped, and it tasted like raw hamburger.



100 Word Dash III writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Let's take flash fiction to the extreme. Can you tell a complete story with just 100 words. If so this is your opportunity to shine.

Topic: A first kiss between strangers.

Mandatory Word List: blind, orange, hamburger, puppy

The story must be about the above topic, and must include at least three words from the mandatory word list. Creative approaches are of course encouraged.

All stories must have a main character, setting, conflict, and resolution.

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