Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted January 16, 2012


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What happens after the final breath

Death's Sleep

by LupaLuna

Death's Sleep

Fixate, eyes drop fast
Dreams come not, away they rush
So cold. I am done.



5-7-5 Poetry contest entry


My interpretation of the final moments before death takes hold of a human mind.
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