General Poetry posted November 25, 2011


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I wrote this the morning after the Tsunami hit Japan

Come Pray With Me

by DebTim1

Hidden deep within the sea
Nature's Beast resides
Anger rising breaking free
Devastation he provides

Many helpless unaware
Life changing force arrives
Gripping fear and unprepared
Running for their lives

Like nothing ever seen before
Debris sent deep inland
Wall of water - wild roar
Many miles passed the sand

Buildings crumbling all around
Survivors on roofs stand
Cars floating upside-down
Mass destruction of the land

Tragedy has struck our world
Together we must band
Reaching out our Flags unfurled
One World One Love We Stand

This disaster is World Wide
Disheartening to see
Let's give all we can provide
Then come and pray with me

~DebTim~



5-7-5 Poetry contest entry


March 12 th 2011 the day after the Tsunami it Japan, I was inspired to write this poem.
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