General Poetry posted August 25, 2011


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It's about the speaker sending sighs to the wind.

The Wind

by e-EL

Wind blowing my hair,
Come here and listen to me.
Take my tears with you.



5-7-5 Poetry contest entry


This haiku was made in such a way that the reader may consider himself/herself talking to the wind and asking the wind to swiftly take away all the pain the speaker had experienced.
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