Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted March 1, 2011


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Loss

Sunset

by belinda45

My aching soul weeps with regret.
Unerringly forward the day softly sets.

The world on its axis continues to turn
While sorrow closes my throat with its burn.

I have nothing to do but wait for the dawn,
Praying it brings a sweetly new song.

If I'd done things different I'd have no regrets,
But I'd have no daydreams to sweetly beset

My soul-weary travel down a path strew with hope
And topped with dew-drops that kaleidoscope

To a place of encouragement at the end of the day
Where I find my sweet Savior as I kneel down to pray.

Thank You, Lord, for the journey I knew.
Help me now find my comfort in You.




Thank you to MoonWillow for the beautiful artwork.
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Artwork by MoonWillow at FanArtReview.com

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